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at the ends of my eye's fingertips,
blazing the once calm horizon.
the faint morning light breaks,
painting the lackluster clouds a new.
giving birth to the new day,
and the hopes there of.
and maybe,
just maybe,
i wont have to hope anymore.
©2005-2009 ~DeerDance0084
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I want to believe in myself once again,
so i dream of a man, whos hopes never end
and kiss with a girl whos as lovely as you
id give you my heart if, you gave me the truth

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wow i normally have a hard time getting into short poems BUT i really like this, g/j

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Silence has it's own life, its ways of telling lies.
It's stories between thin lines; its secrets in disguise can leave conclusions running wild, turning logic to denial... bringing silence into life.
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:hug:

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it took a while for her to figure out she could run but when she did she was long gone, long gone.


<3
:icondeerdance0084:
thank you, i really dont like most the short ones i write. but it seems i couldnt add more or take away from this one.

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you'll never know the true exent of your own heart, til you give it all away

i believe in love, peace, and humanity...for without it, the world would be full of animals
:icondeerdance0084:
?

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you'll never know the true exent of your own heart, til you give it all away

i believe in love, peace, and humanity...for without it, the world would be full of animals
:icondeadandbroken16:
*shrugs* i just felt like giving u a hug :P is that so wrong? lol

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it took a while for her to figure out she could run but when she did she was long gone, long gone.


<3
:iconblissfuldarkness:
wow i liked it great job!

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Bad art is more tragically beautiful than good art because it documents human failure
:icondeerdance0084:
yes, yes it is

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you'll never know the true exent of your own heart, til you give it all away

i believe in love, peace, and humanity...for without it, the world would be full of animals
:icondeadandbroken16:
and why's that?

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it took a while for her to figure out she could run but when she did she was long gone, long gone.


<3
:icondeerdance0084:
because

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you'll never know the true exent of your own heart, til you give it all away

i believe in love, peace, and humanity...for without it, the world would be full of animals

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